GameGuides talk:Fireswordiii's GOF 2 guide/@comment-71.90.58.108-20121023233517/@comment-207.119.222.98-20130224014502

I feel like writing a guide in a conversational style tends to turn people off. If you would like my advice, try to write guide that are more objective, or give reasons for your opinions (ie; explain how you weighed the benefits and risks of a particular item). For example, "I feel that the M4 Raccoon is the best primary weapon because 1) it has a range of 3.7 km, which is greater than the range of mobs' guns, 2) it has the highest DPS of any primary in the game, 3) it has some autoaim, 4) if you have 4 equipped, you can one-shot any non-boss small ship on normal mode, and 5) the recharge time is much shorter after a successful hit. Now that's what I'd call sick.